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A Journal of Rhetoric, Writing, and Culture

A Follow-up from Yesterday

Regarding the Inside Higher Ed column I wrote about yesterday: Gerald Nelms posted an excellent (and devastating) critique of Major's argument on the IHE site yesterday. I would urge everyone to read it. I posted a response (on IHE) to the Major/Nelms debate this morning, and I'm re-posting it here, as follows:

 

Professor Major’s response to Professor Nelms, like Major’s original column, contains some refreshingly honest admissions and the seeds of a few useful questions. But Major’s undoubtedly well-intentioned argument is undone by his sheer ignorance of most scholarship in composition and rhetoric.
 
Major claims to “respect” comp/rhet, and he chides Nelms for reading a “different” essay than the one Major intended. The original essay, Major claims, was not about comp/rhet scholarship and therefore shouldn’t be read as such. Fair enough. But that skirts a more important issue here: If Major did know anything substantial about comp/rhet scholarship, he never would have framed the issue the way he does, and he would have realized that some of the questions he asks—some good questions, I might add—are answered extensively in the available scholarship in comp/rhet.
 
To my mind, the best question Major asks is why English (literature) professors, given the opportunity, avoid teaching composition like the plague. His own tentative answers indicate that he is not familiar with (or if he is familiar with, he ignores) the extensive historical scholarship in comp/rhet that sheds light on this question. Sharon Crowley, James Berlin, Susan Miller, Thomas Miller, Stephen North, and many others have written book-length treatments of the teaching of composition, paying special attention to the role composition has played within the structures of English departments over the past 140 years or so. Anyone familiar with this work would not exhibit the sort of gee-whiz approach that Major does.
 
The anecdote about the irate phone call from the physics professor serves a rhetorical function painfully familiar to any professor or graduate student in rhetoric and composition: The invocation of crisis. In this often-recycled narrative, student writing is bad and getting worse. Students can’t write comprehensible and correct sentences like they used to be able to do. We’ve fallen away from a golden age—maybe it was ten years ago, maybe twenty, maybe fifty. But things are broken and if we don’t fix them now our whole society will go to hell in a handbasket. But historical and empirical research demonstrate two things quite clearly: First, this “crisis” is nothing new, and it appears to be more a matter of perception than reality. Complaints about the atrocious grammar and mechanics in college students’ writing can be found as far back as 1841. The complaints lodged in 1841, along with those in 1875, and 1975, and 2008, and many of the years in between those . . . all sound remarkably similar. Second, the quality of student writing, if measured by the frequency of grammatical and mechanical errors, has remained essentially unchanged over the past hundred years. And, if examined from other angles, as Professor Nelms points out, student writing is now much better than it ever was. For example, students now write much longer, more fully elaborated papers than they did a hundred years ago.
 
I could go on much more, but I will conclude with this: Major’s argument that the teaching of composition might be improved if more experienced English (literature) professors taught composition. I happen to teach at an institution where all members of the English department, from adjuncts to full professors, teach at least a couple of sections of composition each semester. And I can attest that such an arrangement solves none of the problems Professor Major thinks it might solve. In some ways, it may make them worse.
 

 

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Submitted by marknoe on

"It may well be, in fact, that competence in editing and correctness is a late developing skill that blossoms only after students begin taking pride in their writing and seeing themselves as having ideas important enough to communicate.” Engaging Ideas John C. Bean

Though he sounds hesitant to put forward this hypothesis, I still appreciate this quotation from John C. Bean's. It is succinct and presents and argument that those outside composition, such as your physics professor, can understand (if not necessarily agree with). Since physics professors are often looking for straightforward reports that envision language as a transparent medium to convey factual information, this might not work for him. For him, grammar inconsistencies might be analogous to a smudge on a microscope lens. It simply obscures reality on the other side of the lens. Wipe it off and get to work. And, the key to Bean's statement is that professors see students as capable of having something called "ideas." Again, if a student is doing the same physics experiment that every other undergraduate has done for the last 20 years, with exactly the same result, no actual thinking need go on, and any ideas are sure to be wrong.

Mark

 

 

 

 

Submitted by Tim Mayers on

Mark,

Thanks for the Bean quote. I had not seen that quote before, and like you, I think it is succinct and compelling, even if tentatively stated. It reminds me of the argument Mike Rose makes throughout Lives on the Boundary, as well as in much of his scholarship from the 1980s.

I once heard a related argument made by a linguistics professor: i.e., that functional expertise in grammatical and mechanical correctness is really a hallmark of advanced literate competence; it is not, in other words, a "basic" skill as so many seem to believe.

But that does seem to be a tough argument to make in most academic quarters. I suppose we can keep trying, though.

Tim

Submitted by rabq (not verified) on

the best question Major asks is why English (literature) professors, given the opportunity, avoid teaching composition like the plague. ?? i dont agree with that to be honest

Ryan

 

Submitted by steffrson (not verified) on

William Major conflates two issues in his critique of the teaching of writing: the practice of assigning writing classes to non-specialists (faculty and graduate student) and adjuncts; and the notion that good writing is grammatically correct writing.

Submitted by cennarob (not verified) on

Some of the books Mayers cites as evidence of Major’s ignorance make the point–as Major does–that writing departments have historically been relegated to the back of the bus. It seems to me that Major’s article wants to change this fact. Too bad Nelms and Mayers didn’t get it.